SaiSaku Oneshot

[cynchick]

This has been lurking in my head for a while now, and now that I'm between fics I've finally gotten around to writing it out. I love SaiSaku, and its my favorite "canonically possible" Sakura pairing. I blame Shipuuden for stirring up my love for them again, with all the SaiSaku fanservice lately. Inkbat umbrella scene = cutest thing ever.

Anyway, even though its not my normal thing, I hope people give it a chance and that they enjoy it. :D

Title: Once More, With Feeling
Pairing: Sai / Sakura
Rating: M, for lemony goodness.
Summary: Sakura didn't know what she was thinking when she showed up on his doorstep.

Comments

[hieronymousb.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I can't wait to read this after I've finished my work. SaiSaku is just too cute. XD

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Hope you enjoy it! XD

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

I love you so much right now.

You hit so many of my Sai x Sakura kinks in this - Sakura enjoying teaching Sai, Sai being unable to paint her eyes, that he called her 'ugly' 'cause she was pretty...

The sex was great and my favorite part was when he calls her on being a hypocrite - telling him to be honest about his emotions while lying about hers.

Also, Sai's apartment was exactly how I always imagined it.

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Im glad you liked it. And I always imagine Sai as the kind of boyfriend who, even though he loves you, is still unfailingly honest and will tell you that yes, that outift does make you look fat. Like a good friend would. I had a boyfriend like that once. It was kinda refreshing. XD

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

I imagine it would be.

And yep, Sai would be that boyfriend, and I really think he'd actually be an awesome one. If something he did bugged you (with few exceptions) you'd only need to tell him once.

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

I think so too. He has a very compartmentalized way of thinking and learns quickly. If one was so selfishly inclined, one could pretty much train him to be the perfect boyfriend. Which would be terrible, but tempting. XD

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

*nods*

And I really, really fun idea to play around with in fic. I don't think Sakura would ever do it, but I think she would be aware that she could.

[zelha.livejournal.com]

FLUFFY LOVE FOR THE SOCIALLY STUNTED DORK!! *lovesloves* I really like how he shows fristration because he doesn't get Sakura's eye color right, and how he practically lets her ride him like a pony. XD

Lovely, lovely, lovely! *favs*

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Thanks! And what a fine, studly pony he is. XDD

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Hell. Yeah.

That mental image is just... *guh*

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

isnt it? Sai is RAWR. >:3

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Hell, yeah.

[thefuzzyhat.livejournal.com]

I still love you. MOAR NAO.

My goodness. Reading it again spurs me on to finish my SaiSaku doujinshi. Yeah, bb. U mah muse. <333

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

DOUJIN SMEX NAO.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

PLEASE TELL ME YOU'LL LINK IT ON saisaku WHEN YOU POST?

[strange_quark]

I love this so much :D

Sai's such a lovable dork, the sex was hot, and it was refreshing to see Sakura be the experienced one for a change and have her show him the ropes.

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Thanks! It was tricky to write virginal sex, especially guy!virgin, as its something I cant relate to and have no experience with personally. Especially challenging to keep it slightly awkward yet still hot. XD

[strange_quark]

Well I think you did a very good job with it. I think that sometimes, awkward-but-still-fun sex can be hotter than all the mindblowing-but-unrealistic sex that's in so much smut.

[netheb.livejournal.com]

I just finished to read your fic and my first reaction was something like "Wow... that was hot. I never could believe that this bastard was even able to show emotions or concern for anyone".
But you turned it pretty well, as usual ^^


May I ask about what/who you are planning on writing now ? =)

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

thanks glad you enjoyed it. :D

im working on an itasaku right now. the first chapter will be out in a couple weeks.

[anat-astarte.livejournal.com]

Lovely fic!

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

thanks!