Bwa ha ha double post!
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cynchickAlso stolen from everyone.
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Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
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Date: 2009-11-04 09:29 pm (UTC)I hated doing that to them, but Deidara had to find out about Sakura at some point and he could NOT be okay with it. He is not an understanding, compassionate sort of guy, and would definitely not take what he sees as a personal betrayal lightly or nonviolently
Word.