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[cynchick]

Chapter 4 is posted. Also, this story's gotten bigger than originally planned. I decided to split some chapters in half, and extend things a little. Nobody minds a longer story, right? XD

Enjoy!

Title: Vespertine
Chapter: The Truth
Pairing: Itachi/Sakura
Rating: M
Summary: Two enemies strike a bargain to save what they both hold dear. He will reveal a truth that shakes her beliefs, drawing her into a web of lies and betrayal. She will offer the redemption for which he never hoped and show him how to be human again.

Comments

[syl-luvs-silver.livejournal.com]

I am off to read this new chapter, woohoo.
And oh, get some sleep, will you? :P

[syl-luvs-silver.livejournal.com]

Oh, I've just read it and I loved it. The development in their relationship is so unhurried and utterly believable... and yay, Itachi starts to share the goss.

Not to mention that I got a little (alright, massive) thrill when I saw that you decided to use the song after all. :D It's very fitting for this chapter!

ps: ST lyrics are wrong. It's 'and I can't live alone in this life', not 'lie'. :P

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Oh. Well thats what it showed on the site. I copy-pasted it. It fits better this way anyway. :P

Glad you liked the chapter!

[hiwatari-ivanov.livejournal.com]

Yay! A new chapter. This has made my day happier indeed.

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Yay! XD

[zelha.livejournal.com]

>DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Lol. Did you notice I cut it in half? So technically youve read 4 and 5. Also, "6" is with the beta. XD

[zelha.livejournal.com]

I noticed! And I actually thought: "Oh dear, Cynny is so going to get mauled with this cliffie/teaser."

XDDDD

Yay for 6! Moar, moar! >D

[littledustbunny.livejournal.com]

ahhh that was so painfully teasing! I want to read mooorrrrre :) love it!

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Next chapter wont take as long to update, since its already written. XD

[tamgelb.livejournal.com]

Hi there. I've been a fan of your stories for awhile. I really like where this one is going! I'm very curious to see what Itachi will reveal in the next chapter.

Itachi's comments on Sakura being a lumberjack are great fun. Combined with his narration of the state of affairs before Konoha was founded...about children being forced to be shinobis at a young age...it makes me wonder what exactly Itachi would rather be, if he was not a ninja.
hehe, I'm getting visions on Monty Python now..."I've always wanted to be a lumberjack!" (yes, I'm a dork like that)

Anyways, great story so far and looking foward to reading more.

[cynchick.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Lol, Monty Python. Thats awesome. Now Im wishing that when they left the clinic Itachi should have said "I dont want to go in the cart! Im feeling much better!" XD

[(Anonymous)]

Oh, absolutely wonderful. You have such a knack for writing, I remember nearly dying from sheer awesomeness when I found Perception in the sea of badly-written fanfics. Can't wait for the next chapter! :DDD